52. The subject of food is never far
from our minds here in College Admissions. It is a topic of serious
conversation this year on campus, too, with the publication of a book called
The Hungry Soul: Eating and the Perfecting of our Nature, by Leon Kass, M.D., a
Chicago faculty member who teaches in the College. The book takes a
philosophical look at what food, eating, and table manners have to tell us
about our human estate. Compose an essay about a memorable meal you have eaten.
We are especially interested in the details: the occasion, your company at this
meal, its physical setting, the kinds of foods you ate, or their preparation.
(University of Chicago)
I was 11 years old. I had just flown to another continent,
and been on two flights. It was winter. It was cold. It was evening. But I had
reached. I was at my aunt’s house for the Christmas holidays.
That journey sticks out in my memory as it was the first time
I had travelled alone. I left my departure country early in the morning, and
arrived at my destination in the evening (local time). I had gotten very little
sleep on the journey, and was exhausted by the time I reached my aunt’s house.
I was also very hungry, as I do not have a particular liking
for airplane food and not eaten much on the journey. My aunt had cooked a
simple but absolutely delicious meal of Pasta al Pesto to celebrate my arrival.
I had spent time with my cousin, catching up and talking for
a bit, as my aunt prepared the meal. The pesto was home-made, and the aroma
made my mouth water. We all sat at the dining table, which was laid out for the
four of us (my uncle, aunt, cousin, and I). The room was not overwhelmed by
bright, glaring lights. Instead it was filled with warm and mellow lights from a
few candles and soft light bulbs. The room had a very Christmassy atmosphere.
The food on the table was simple, traditional, and perfect.
After the long journey, I could not have wished for a more satisfactory meal. It
filled my stomach, and made me feel welcomed. Yet, the setting, the good food,
and my family, were not enough to keep exhaustion from me.
My eyes slowly began to shut, and as the pasta disappeared off
my plate, my mind began dreaming. I soon went to sleep.
This meal is memorable to me for many reasons. But what I
think makes this meal truly memorable was my company. Without my wonderful
family who were present, and so graciously welcomed me, it would have just been
another Pasta al Pesto. They made this Pasta al Pesto special.
Word count: 462
This has potential, though it is too abbreviated, but I like the open style and it feels like you are allowing yourself to be seen clearly, which is an important element of a good college essay. Of course, the topic may not be the one you want to include in your "book" but the style is something to consider.
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